- Very comical monologue, it's a good choice for you style of acting.
- The voice suits the character very well but you need to work on your diction a touch more; some phrases or words aren't very clear.
- There are some lines that you can accentuate much more so be sure to look through your monologue again for opportunities to accentuate.
I feel that these notes are very fair and I've worked on these by working on my diction when using my "Syme" voice and annotating my script on how to say my lines.
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