We made notes after each scene of what we needed to improve and what needed adding. The way we've worked out who would change what, we decided we would alter our own scenes. Below are the changes which need to be made:
- Lorna's scene - Narration needs to be recorded
- James' scene - Silhouettes need to be sorted
- Lewis' scene - Narration needs to be recorded - Placards need to be made
- Rob's scene - Cut down
- Rhiannon's scene -
- Charlie's scene - Learn our separate lines - use more expression - gesture towards the person we're standing by in the audience
- Ollie's scene - Need to sort projection and lighting
I will make my placards and record my narration ready for next lesson.
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