Today we looked at our campfire stories which we were told to find for homework last lesson. We gathered together in a circle as a class and told our stories; I volunteered to go first. After each person read their story, the class offered feedback on what went well and how it could be improved. After finding things to improve on, we read our first couple of lines with our alterations made.Following this we, got into pairs (Rhiannon & Charlie/ Ollie & James/ Lorna & I) and worked on each others stories by listening to us reading them then offering constructive criticism. We then got back into a circle and performed, our now, perfected tales.
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